Random Fleeting Thoughts

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    Random Fleeting Thoughts

    Bits and pieces of grim reality

    I hold inside of me.

    For reference.....

    No reverance to those

    who once stood to the right of me;

    Sharks who encircled me

    hoping for another bite of me

    Or another night with me...

    Mistakenly

    expecting to find no fight in me

    Jealousy and hypocrisy

    devouring every exit key

    Delightedly-

    in spite of me and my powerful words

    Consuming scattered seeds like birds

    Move my weight rapidly

    despite my shattered nerves

    Knowing all too well

    not everyone gets the regrets they all may well deserve

    Trying decisively

    to keep my feet

    planted firmly to this earth

    Though my soul has desired to leave it

    from the very moment of birth

    For what it is and isn't worth.....

    I will offer my opinions angles and curves

    Randomly.....

    Never censored; ever candidly.

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    kitap2006 commented on Random Fleeting Thoughts

    04-25-2009

    damn i felt that somewhere in my lower level theres something about a poem like this that just turns me on THE TRUTH NOT GLOSSED UP

    dahlusion commented on Random Fleeting Thoughts

    01-30-2009

    Beautifully truthful. "Regret": useless, wasted energy…

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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