Rape

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    It took me a long time to decide on whether to post this poem.  But, I decided it might help someone else not feel so alone.  We cant be ashamed of what someone else did.  Thanks for reading it.

    Rape

    In my mind I hide and wait,
    wondering why this was my fate.
    I feel nothing, its cold in here.
    I see darkness very clear.

    Let it happen, dont hesitate,
    Hope its done before its too late.
    Silent, escaping, thoughts run free.
    I look at her the very likes of me.

    He can have her, shes nothing to me,
    Just a front,  me he cannot see.
    The best of me is not within his range,
    Shes an escape and its all very strange.

    I didnt take very good care of her,
    Now she lays and has to let this occur.
    I let him in and she pays the price,
    His wicked ways and I was enticed.

    I will lose her later,
    Be glad God made her,
    Many facets and faces,
    Many times and many places.

    All for the love of the hater.

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    Sx9 commented on Rape

    07-29-2010

    beautiful ways of vibesin sorrow,,never easy when u open ur eyes and still there,life still hope,,yes god is good,,walk good.

    optimistic commented on Rape

    07-23-2009

    Different way of expressing pain I like the flow of this poem so much darkness and sad descriptions of an un ruley nightmare.

    BlacknWhite

    07/29/2010

    Thank you for the comments. I have been absent for awhile. Just wanted to say thanks.

    1990lh commented on Rape

    07-18-2009

    wow great poem it is full of so much emotion sadness and yet pride i love it

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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