RATHER BE IN HEAVEN

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    I WAS HAVEING A MOMENT WHEN I WAS WRITEING THIS. POEM
    AND SO OFTEN I WISH I WAS UP IN HEAVEN.

    LIFE CAN  GET HARD SOMETIMES. AND I'M SURE MANY MIGHT FEEL WHAT I WAS   FEELING THREW THIS POEM.
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    RATHER BE IN HEAVEN

    Life is hard....i feel like crying in the dark.
    the only blanket i have are my arm's.
    i hold my self so hard. got bruise's and scares.

    now i look up and say lord this shit is to hard.

    when is it my time to go why dont you let me kno.
    i rather just die.cuz this life has to much shit.. for one bitch to handle
    lord can your hear my crys...take me home with you.
    let me die.

    its like life has a dick..cuz i keep gettin fucked.
    its like i take one step foward but then two steps back.
    then finaly i get smacked with lifes dick.
    and slide the fuck off track.

    fuck this shit. take me back lord. i wanna be with you..
    i'm tired of putting on a act. tired of actin like nothins wrong.
    i'm pretty fuckin tired of bein strong..when really i just wanna go home.and have my wings

    up ther i feel only feel 2 emotions feelin happyness & loved
    all that from up above flying and watchin the people u love.

    for damn sure...it seems pretty clear i rather be in heaven. then be here.
    so much death makes people depressed...lonlyness hurt. so much emotion.its enough to make me go bazerk.

    i rather be in heaven then to be in this hell...and leave this story to tell


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    By Karma

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    ccslim commented on RATHER BE IN HEAVEN

    10-28-2009

    A superb write by content but causes puffed bottom lip by ebonics For real! You nailed the fist shake, the fear and discontent but it looses power by grammer. Not a dis sis! You have shared a powerful message that can go farther, if that is what you seek!

    countrypoet commented on RATHER BE IN HEAVEN

    10-24-2009

    As someone who has been through a lot of tough things in my life,I can relate to your feelings,but realize that at times like this we need to pray to God for strength and wisdom to guide us through.We also need to lean on our friends and family for support and encouragement.Keep the faith and better days will come.

    HakiNatuwah1 commented on RATHER BE IN HEAVEN

    10-19-2009

    wow this poem is so powerful that it makes the reader become overwhelmed with emotions...I would love for you to put this much power into expressing Love and happiness instead of so much despair and hate ...you never know you may even have the power to change the world...Nevertheless it was beautifully written...

    mdpoetgirl commented on RATHER BE IN HEAVEN

    10-02-2009

    Anyone who's lived at all knows what you're talking about here. This brings to mind a line from the movie "Rocky Balboa," and I'm paraphrasing here, but it says, "Nothing will beat you down harder than life will. And it will beat you down to your knees and keep you down IF you let it." I have been beaten down so many times and am in a constant battle to keep standing. I'm telling you, without God, I couldn't do it. But somehow He always manages to reach me and pour his healing oils on me and helps me to rise again. Give it ALL to Him. His yoke is easy and His burden is light, so He can handle it. Wishing you love, joy, and most of all peace...

    Worthless commented on RATHER BE IN HEAVEN

    10-02-2009

    I'd rather be in heaven instead of this living hell and if for some reason I end up in hell, it will still be better then life itself....

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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