Rattle Snake

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Be careful of the rattle snake thats out to hunt its prey.(Male or Female)

Rattle Snake

Right and Wrong
starring a person in there face
knowing the consequence of both the situation
not caring about the out come
just the feeling you fill
rushing up and down
the blood stream
just a piece
without a trace
a little piece
the flattering
pimping he gave me
just to
put a smile on my face
blinded
from the truth
tinkling feeling rushing
through the blood stream
head to toes
not knowing
he's about to
crush me to pieces
by the way
while,
 he's pimping
 the smile on my face
rattle snake
 out to hunt its prey
another piece of meat
swoller up
setting its trap where to 
demonised
poison the body,
by a touch,kiss, smile, hug
his venom
searching for his prey
right from wrong
I know
not worry about the out come
just a satisfy
to cool down the prey
blinded by the charm
the pimping he gave, Knowing
right from wrong
caught by venom
poison
rushing down the blood stream
another victim
The Rattle Snake, 
snack
 lunch,dinner
can't blame any one
right and wrong was starring
a person in the face.
Can't find love any more
from one mistake.
The venom
carried in
THE RATTLE
SNAKE!


Wakeitha Kilpatrick
copy(C)right2012

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omari commented on Rattle Snake

05-13-2012

Few typos...I gathered the gist of the poem could be the vulnerability of a woman to the seductiveness of man and his words being the poison. It also speaks to the inherent needs of women that places them in the glaze of the serpent...Be Careful...lol

Wakeitha

05/20/2012

Yes, all women or men must be careful cause the venom can poison anybody. Special if your caught by what the eyes let you see. LOL Thanks for your comment,God bless

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