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    My son is getting into poetry also.. Doesnt have the internet so i'm posting his poems.. Please feel free to critique his poems. He would like the input very much so. Thanks

    re: son's poem

    The Beauty I see
    Is hidden mostly from me
    They're is a hole hidden
    From her
    That shows all the beauty within
    I pray she will see
    Too all the beauty I see
    A loving smile wide
    Eyes so nice
    With a laugh
    That makes my  heart soars
    Voice so gently takes away
    The sorrows of days
    tough as any warrior
    Kills with a sweetheart
    Mom I am proud
    A mother so Beautiful
    You are
    Love filled son I am
    Telling
    The Beauty I see
    I love you mom with all my heart

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    knight4696 commented on re: son's poem

    06-08-2010

    Blue - Tell your son he has a special gift and that he did an awesome job on this tribute poem to his very talented Mom! :) Ken

    bluskyinthenite

    06/08/2010

    Why thank you very much.. Ken thanks alot.. pray all your desires come about.

    Teardrops commented on re: son's poem

    05-24-2010

    He loves you and writes about it . Great son and great poem . Marie

    bluskyinthenite

    05/24/2010

    thank you so much for reading my sons poem... He is new to poetry as I... I will let him no you enjoyed his write. thank you so much

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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