reaching in

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    reaching in

     each dawn which rises
       singing its tourchered song
    i open my eyes
       to the circus of fears-
    what can i say, who
       could help me, right my wrongs
    i reach out to touch
       then i find out nothings' here...

    oh Lord- dear God
       to you all might be
    i ask in prayer
       'bout a desease free world-
    if you two are
       so strong, where did you flee
    not that i disbelieve
       tomorrow will be a warm not cold world.

    Love, war, greed
       and pain- each day begins
    no matter how dim
        each clue leads me forseeing-
    i smile, you sigh
        i cry, you laugh, who sins
    is it me ?! you !?
        are we becoming blind, with "desease"-

           Chrisjan
     

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    organicchick commented on reaching in

    06-01-2009

    Nice write...........I thought that the "two" you were referring to was Christ and God, thanks for clarifying!! I really like the whole first verse.
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    mdpoetgirl commented on reaching in

    05-31-2009

    Chris, who were you referring to in the 2nd paragraph when you say "you two"? This poem is pretty good, but watch those little typos... it'll make ur poems so much better without them.
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    Chrisjan

    05/31/2009

    The "you two" are refering to, is the Lord Jesus Christ + God in Heaven, where did they go, when I needed help. Not understanding at that time, God works, in Gods' time !

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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