Real Man

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This poem kinda goes in circles and talks about many friends, aquaintances, and strangers I wish to get the chance to meet. So if your reading this just know its a circle poem and me wanting to get to know that real man i search to find...

Real Man

I finally talked to a real man last Saturday night,
 Being around him and looking into his eyes just felt so right!
He spoke to me like I was a human, He is a real man!
The soft touch of his hands, The love of his words
Made me wish more and more that he wasn't with her!!!
I've known them both for years,
But I've also been out of the picture.
I've thought about him often and wondered everyday how he was...
And Saturday night just wasn't enuf time to catch up!
 All I do now is think about him and what he's doing?
If maybe he's thinking of me too? I can't wait to see him again soon!
Borrowed my money and now won't call me,
He was only using me!
I looked up to him as a Friend
Maybe even a brother?
I should call Tony or his lover?
Maybe both? I need closure?
I need my money more then he does,
Why should I suffer?
I'll tell his girlfriend and then he'll suffer?
But my true friends remain at church
The pastor, his family and his brother
They all help me thru!
They Help me foget my past and torture that brought me to you,
I know now I won't ever again be black and blue,
Used and abused and I will FORGET the pain that you all put me thru!!!
I hope this was a sign from God
finally able to speak to a REAL MAN
A friend who seems to understand
on June 28, 2009!
And Let it be known He sure is FINE!!!!

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EyesOfRain commented on Real Man

09-23-2012

Wow I have SO been at his place, with all the questions and the anger buzzing through my hurt and angry heart. I love the redeeming value of this, where you haven't given up nor judged every man on earth by this one fool's actions. This poem seems like it was good therapy to the writer, and it has been good therapy for me as a reader. I love your honesty.

EyesOfRain

09/23/2012

I meant to put "this" place not "his" place!

dancinghawk commented on Real Man

10-07-2009

love the exploration of what a "real man" is ... can't tell in the middle if your "real man" dissed you, or just listened to your story about the other who dissed you :) ... but yeah, a real man ... knows how to listen ... a real human ... knows how to listen ... glad you found one! thx for posting!

Worthless

01/07/2010

He was just an old friend I tought was a real friend and as always borrows money from a poor homeless jobless broke bitch and never pays me back... The pastor's brother is the one I started to trust and talk to. I've finally learned to never trust a soul and when you do Back off or you'll go further in the HOLE!!!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Last Breath 0
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Dear Daughter, My Sweet Princess... 0
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I Barely Know You... 1
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A CURSE FROM HELL.... 2
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Loving You Still? 4
Opening Day... 1
My sister and Me... 6
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