Real

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    Real

     Im lookin for something permanent 
    something that will stick. 
    Not some absent friend 
    or a sometimes Dick. 
    I need something 
    i can feel someone i know is real.
    Not some made up guy from my dreams.
     But someone who feels how i feel. 
    Some one who is ready to make things work.
     And understand that sometimes feelings
    get hurt but at the end 
    it will still be us against the world.

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    Chaos128 commented on Real

    12-10-2009

    Way to make it plain, Nataly, ha ha. Be receptive and believe what you want is already as good as yours and the macrocosm will make it so. Nice work!
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    Nataly

    12/21/2009

    thank you

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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