Reality Check

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    Reality Check

    June 23, 2009 @ 11:20am
    Reality Check


    reality check:
    I'm sitting on the flagstone deck
    cloistered by wetland woods
    the temperature ~ a comfortable 72
    refreshful breezes blow
    cheery bird songs scent the air
    the sky is blue beyond the clouds up there
    I'm sipping Simply lemonade
    the hummingbirds sip the syrup I made
    my eyes drink in iridescent colours
    as my fingers
    write this poem

    ©Linda Renzulli

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    GentleT commented on Reality Check

    06-23-2009

    Sounds like your having a nice day there. I like to watch the hummingbirds too. They are amazing. And could you send some of the lemonade my way. :)
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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