Emotional Rear View Error!

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  • pura
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Emotional Rear View Error!

& bedspread you may as well tuck me in at night

Wrapped in sheets tonight, bound tight in fear & spite


Inside me swirls of darkness unclear

The spaces between us won’t reappear


From closed eyes the truth inside the lies cast

Sombre it feels days seem to come so fast,


 Dwelling on what’s past done and dusted

Love and the reoccurring of those that cannot be trusted


At first sight, blinded with hope that failure denied

Then pink love in flames sparked one hell of a ride


And lonely screams of pain, not used to light

Re emerging in dawns surprise much to no ones delight


The setting of the sun dusk showers tears it cries rain

Poised dipped in evenings skye bitten on the horizon of pain


So scared of days now no longer warmth and sun

Darkness sits waiting for dawn to come undone

 

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sevyn7 commented on Emotional Rear View Error!

02-16-2014

beautifully written, you had me hooked from beginning to end.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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