Reckoning of the Bakers

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This poem is due to the efforts of Madelynn’s original concept of Blueberry Blood Cake, and the framework that she put in place for Poets of Blood: Bleed for a Cause interactive forum.

Reckoning of the Bakers


Reckoning of the Bakers 

 

Oh, but for taste, in darkened hour

A cake be churned, filled with blue flour

Blend love’s lost light and pinch of despair

Azure smoke plumes shall harness the air

 

With a leaf of black licorice grief

We fly to the mount of insanity

Do or die, laugh to cry

All toil is the putrescence of vanity

 

A quickened haste of running woes

Don’t forget the Ogre’s toes

All be it said, he was our friend

But he knew he would get it in the end

 

The tree’s pitch sap, bled in a snap

Incantations called up for vile potion

Elation pent up, can’t wait to sup

Under skies of bent, frenzied emotion

 

These chores of gore, from sorrows pour

Only half-known, comes sure horror

“Mercy“ is begged, but unheeded

By the slaying for blue blood excreted

 

From the Tower in this hour

Lives of leisure and those cower

Time draws near, and soils need raking

 

Rise the tone of their cries

‘Neath the grief stricken skies

For the morbid and ashen souls making

 

For we steal, not borrow, in baking

We bide the squeal of the lives that we’ve taken

 

Who will answer for spreading blue cancer

The faeries black licorice for dancers

Any icy-hot stake of blood’s berry cake

And of prayers rise long-waited answers

 

Chasing black wind, behind foe comes friend

 On wings of Light’s flaming spire

The bright pennons spread, reviving the dead

From dark side of moon, faeries impugned

Nothing left of black heart’s desire

Reserved to Gehenna’s hot fire

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Hampton commented on Reckoning of the Bakers

02-13-2010

A delicious concoction of words and phrases blended to perfection.

Marsink

02/14/2010

Thanks to Maddy for the theme and elements! I appreciate your perspective shared.

mustascheman commented on Reckoning of the Bakers

02-07-2010

Nice! Very cool! I like the tone and the fantastical images that are seen when reading. Great pace also, this is a style I strive for, never achieve but still strive for. Well done.

Marsink

02/07/2010

Thanks for coming by to visit, much appreciated! If it wasn't for Madelynn's forum post, this poem wouldn't exist. It makes sense to visit her as well.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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