red dawn surfacing

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    red dawn surfacing

    as it demands balance
    assurance to our safety
    inside and outside these waters
    a wise awakening
    screaming from the mountain tops
    before a cruel storm rises
    unshielding its energy force
    and rippling the horizons
    waiting on the mark
    of a red dawn surfacing
    gathering its stages in iron
    like a whirlpool unrelenting
    for an establishment of order
    regaining composure
    of promises set in stone
    to date until it's over

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    dragonfly1023 commented on red dawn surfacing

    08-05-2009

    these are powerful words regarding the mighty forces of nature and the continual respect it deserves. We are given increasing signs daily by global seismic events and worsening natural disasters, that the balance of nature has been greatly upset. this would be an excellent addition to the P.O.E.T.S. collection Hathor4Wine. please let me know if you would like to include your poem too. thanks Dragonfly

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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