Red Stain

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  • Death

    Red Stain
    Red stain red stain
    I had a brain until I blew it out
    Because I went insane
    I felt no pain
    Red stain

    Red stain red stain
    I had nothing in life
    Ever I could gain
    I tried real hard just to maintain
    Too much is too much
    The result
    A red stain

    Red stain red stain
    I had emotions that would fly around
    All over
    Like a plane
    I always thought I would die
    An old man with a Cain
    Who would have ever guessed
    It would end
    In a red stain

    Nottus mot 2000

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    TreeLife commented on Red Stain

    07-07-2009

    What a poem. I thought it was a very good write. It was funny but then again not. I really did like it
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    Emilia commented on Red Stain

    05-08-2009

    I meant funny not scary. ha ha. my mistake.
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    Emilia commented on Red Stain

    05-08-2009

    I'm sorry but when I read the first part, even though it wasn't necessarily scary, but I laughed because until I blew it out. But it was a really good poem. I've never thought of anything like that before. p.s. I found your brain on the road. jk. No it was really good though. You're a really good poet.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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