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    Red

    my sweet red, so full of love,
    full of passion,
    you walk in time with every beat of my heart
    and the songs of our hearts create
    a sweet melodious harmony
    the windows to your soul reveal
    your secret garden, full of lush green grass,
    beautiful trees
    and mountains that go as high as the sky
    and rivers that end up still and deep
    as they flow from the valleys of your heart
    i am like a single drop of water
    that falls upon your vast ocean
    the multitude of your capacity overwhelms me
    i wish you could see how much it means to me
    to be a part of you
    and you of me, sweet red....

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    phatdaddee commented on Red

    10-22-2010

    Good poem! The imagery leaps from the page with the worplay you've displayed! Keep on sharing! Thank You! PHATDADDEE

    truth917 commented on Red

    04-10-2010

    Wow.. For this to be written so long ago it's so present. You're very talented I enjoy reading your work

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    sweetchinee’s Poems (41)

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    Highs and Lows 7
    Sexual 9
    Waterfalls 6
    Dream 3
    A woman in my place 4
    This desert feeling 4
    Chocolate you 2
    Love uncovered 1
    You're so.... 3
    My hero 2
    fake friends 5
    That part of me 3
    Set me free 3
    Lost 4
    Brown eyes 1
    The end 2
    sweet nothings 1
    I'm a picture in your mind 4
    I write... 2
    Believe 1
    Love and Loss 3
    A special friend 3
    Emotional 1
    Goodbye my love, 3
    Every man's an island 1
    Miserable 1
    Thoughts flow 1
    Have i lost you? 1
    Decisions 1
    To my son 4
    Angry words 3
    This one is for you... 1
    Inspiration 1
    Surreal world 1
    Like Adam 1
    I'm just me 2
    Red 2
    The penitentiary 1
    The collage 1
    rhythm of the wind (who am i?) 1