Redefine

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    • Jolly
    • YEAH! Just found out I'm going to have a baby! Well, technically my wife will, but I'll be there to make inappropriate jokes!

    Redefine

    Barren, forsaken
    Devoid of you and I
    My heart begs you for mercy as I feel myself die
    Yet the lips are unheard, writhing with a silent sigh
    Soul of the forsaken, hollow, blind
    I feel the space between you and I run dry as the line's redefine
    The "Virgin Bride" (Lying lover, stained soul)
    one and the same... the same... the same
    The "Loving Husband" (Dying lover, heart broke)
    one and the same... insane
    Erase, eviscerate, remove the disease see in your eyes
    Clouded windows, perverted by your lies
    The games, the ploys, the live's you destroyed
    And as the razor blade dances, making love to the vein
    The needles join in duet, all against the grain
    Screaming in pain, images I re-create
    Destroy these dirty lives.
    Just fade away, I want to die
    Just peel away, I need to know why
    The rage of surprise, and the shame of my pride
    Blind to your lies, your blatant disguise
    Astonish me now with how severely inclined you are to take my life.
    The line redefines, feel my accelerated half-life decline

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    beautifuldeath commented on Redefine

    12-08-2008

    absolutely wonderful write. I love the line "And as the razor blade dances, making love to the vein". I must admit I had to grin, because the imagery you have created in this one is superb. keep up the good work. I enjoy reading your poems.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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