Reflections on the Pond

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Reflections on the Pond

I watch the calm surface of the pond
as it shines in the light of the full moon
I hear the bubble of the natural spring
that gives it life
in the moonlight, I see the outline of the heron
standing there
quietly, gently,
motionless and majestic
I feel the soft breeze
that sets the ripples in motion
and makes the Spanish moss sway
it caresses my cheek and lifts my hair
and I smell the sweet perfume
of the honeysuckle vines blended
with the smell of the water
the pond at night is a beautiful thing
exciting all the senses
with its magical essence.
if you sit quietly,
you can see that the pond is its own world
bursting with life
unconcerned with the burdens
we put on ourselves
it is serene
surrounded by the bustling world,
and yet, still isolated and pristine
harboring its ecosystem
preserving itself against the elements
that seek to destroy its innocence
to tear it down
and remove the sanctuary.
I sometimes wonder
if people remember that we are stewards
we arent sent here to destroy,
but to save,
not to tear down,
but to build up.
to take care of the world around us
we are suppose to appreciate the beauty
of creation
everyone would realize this
if they would just take the time
to sit at the edge of the pond.

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JimMagill commented on Reflections on the Pond

07-02-2009

"Reflections on the Pond" is a wonderful and inspiring poem! ---JimMagill Web Site: www.jamesmagill.com

kmeadows

07/02/2009

thanks so much, ill be sure to check out your site

ginga commented on Reflections on the Pond

07-01-2009

This reads like an elder explaining to a youngster what they have to do in order to have ponds in the future. I felt I discovered a pond for the first time through this poem. Phenomenal. Ginga

kmeadows

07/02/2009

Thank you Ginga, I so appreciate your comment! :)

wheelsal commented on Reflections on the Pond

07-01-2009

Beautiful imagery and metaphor for our "Stewardship. You brought it to attention very well. Great write, great read.

kmeadows

07/02/2009

Thank you so much for taking the time to read me.I will return the favor shortly. Thank you!

UnworthyFather commented on Reflections on the Pond

07-01-2009

Really very beautiful, KMeadows. So serene, quiet, peaceful, and yet so vibrant. You have really crafted a work of art - much like Thomas Kincaid on the canvas. Beautiful is all I can say. Thanks for sharing this one. 10 from me.

kmeadows

07/02/2009

Thank u so much it gladdens my heart to think someone is able to understand what is in my heart.

Chaos128 commented on Reflections on the Pond

06-30-2009

There's no higher level that this. The most outstanding feature of this work is its self-assurance. This wasn't written as a plea for popularity, this poem was composed by an ARTISTwith a VISION. This is the first poem I've read since I joined this site that I am putting in my favorites

kmeadows

07/01/2009

thank you so much. i am so glad that this was able to reach out to you! Your comment blessed me today:)

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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