Rejected

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  • Emotional
    • stormimartin
    • Wow it's been a long time since I've visited my account they've changed everything! I need to get back into my groove of writing just been so busy being a new Mommy!!!

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    -Why is it when you need someone the most they turn the other cheek?
    It doesn't change it's the same day by day week by week.
    -Making you feel as if you are a two headed freak.
    Just wanting to be loved and accepted.
    -Not always wanting to feel depressed and rejected.
    Sadness and anger filling in my head.
    -Can't close my eyes and lay myself to bed.
    Never talking about these ugly unseen wounds.
    -Wounds that lay deep within my soul.
    You've always made me feel helpless like a little child with no control.
    -Tears fill my eyes and rage fills my heart, as I keep telling myself don't fall apart.

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    Weatherstone commented on Rejected

    04-08-2009

    Once again, I can't help but feel there should be more here. You have a good way of expressing yourself. Keep it up! I'd rework that form a little to get better use of the flow of the words. But that's just me.

    JaLaw commented on Rejected

    03-06-2009

    You should consider being a writer. You write great Expressions.

    ozzydio18 commented on Rejected

    02-26-2009

    nice work.thank you 4 the ad...hope you have a great week...

    rollerderby commented on Rejected

    12-31-2008

    Well done Stormi, I really enjoyed reading a segment of your life, though a sad on, I lived os South Padre Isl. for a while, but at present I'm in Antarctica working. Hope to be back home in Florida in March. Thanks for sharing your work with us! Do

    lonewolf commented on Rejected

    11-23-2008

    very powerful emotions. I'm glad you decided to share.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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