Rejection

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    Rejection

    Well of course the fox she looked her best
    I counted sheep to stay at rest
    a false assumption, one true test

    and though I dwell in constant hell
    "the look" despised the wishing well
    oh, why I feel? no one can tell

    a sappy tale but with no fairy
    led a dream that started scary
    and ended sweet, a moral barley

    Oh why I feel? I'll never know
    an endless though, a constant glow
    that chains the life to make it slow

    the fox she praises where she prays
    a shallow deep inside her haze
    yet I still watch in constant gaze

    so what I've learned is what I've lost
    a simple lesson to be taught
    that need not come at any cost

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    stiches commented on Rejection

    06-29-2009

    i am getting this you dig a chick or you think you dig a chick and your having a hard time fuigaring out what is going on in the heart but less paine or none

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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