Releif

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Releif

I thought my life was over when you walked out of my life,
thought id be lost without you...
An although sometimes i feel lonely,
mostly i feel at ease.
The day you left,
the day my heart stopped breaking

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Moorthy45 commented on Releif

01-12-2011

The outburst of a failed-love is nicely captured. Moorthy45

Topaz2011 commented on Releif

01-12-2011

heartbreaking, and yet lovely. well done, I like.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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