Remember me

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  • JonTalbain
  • Didn't I tell you, what I believe... Did somebody say that....that love like that won't last? Didn't I give you all that I got to, give baby?

Remember me

Candles...Tears...

One of us, is gone now

People...an empty Blackness...

We all knew that it would come soon

Hearses...Caskets...

It was his time to leave us

Headstones... Graves...

I've become its emissary

Roses... Lilies...

Tossed upon the Bed on which he hath his Eternal Rest

The Rain... The Mourning...

Freedom from this life

The Funeral Homes...

Death, you have transfigured me

And the suffering you cause shall be the base of my strength

Your power shall be made known

That will and upon the world

And Yet the only thing that I fear

Is the Beginning and its memories of The End

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XxCrys92xX commented on Remember me

08-07-2009

This is a very good poem. Please keep writing, i enjoy reading. Keep up the good work. -Crys.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

JonTalbain’s Poems (75)

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Carnality 0
For a Love I won't forget 1
Happily Ever After (Part 2) 1
Dragon/Phoeni
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0
Confessions of the soul 2
Perdition 3
Somebody Already Broke My Heart 3
The story untold 1
Drive Me Insane 2
So Tired 0
A Child's Hell 2
They Say... 0
You 0
Goodbye 1
Self Destruction 1
Asylum 0
The Coming Rainstorm (Pt.2) 1
Waking up inside 0
Tell me Which is You? 1
A Glimpse 1
Slash 2
Breezes 1
Silenced 2
The Emotional Runaway Train 1
Before you make the step… 3
Into the Wastelands 1
And So it Seems that... 3
Holding on tight 1
The Silence 1
The Warriors Ethos 1
The Coming Rainstorm 1
Whatever it may be 2
Suffering 4
Memories 3
Inevitable 2
My Truth 1
Whispers... 2
You know what to say 2
The Man that Was... 0
Who I am 5
This is how it works.... 1
Come 1
Shaken 1
When Love Truly Awakens 2
Transcending Love 3
Maybe its just... 1
A thought 0
the pain 1
really? 0
A lost soul 0
Remember me 1
Drowning 1
The darkness 0
??? 0
Calling for help 0
Empty 0
naptime 0
Slivers of shades 1
Only you are the life among the dead 0
A prayer 0
Moonlight 0
Armageddon 0
A Kiss 0
Drawn in 0
whispers 0
Am I wrong? 1
From the pen of a soldier... 1
For Once Upon a Time... 1
The Flame... 0
When all your wishes... 0
Dancing again... 1
unsure 1
You see today... 1
Whispering Voices 0
Addicted 1