Remember Me


  • BigDaddyCash
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Remember me I’m the one who loves you, forever through the annals of time.


Remember Me

Remember me when you write your amazing poetry,

I’m the one who lives for its beauty and chemistry.

There is a light shining down through the darkest sky.

The beacon sent to guide me to that garden on high.

Remember me when the warmest breeze kisses your ear,

With your words of mercy and your kind words that cheer.

For where the bird flies and the bell tolls my shadow lies.

It will fall upon you and you’ll see me through divine eyes.

Remember me I’m the mystery that dwells in your heart,

The compelling thoughts and fertile seed of thy poetic art.

For when the robin sings and the little white cloud cries,

The music and the teardrops capture the hope it implies.

Remember me I’m the cool water that refreshes your soul,

The moisture of baptismal waters giving youth to behold.

For convictions are subtle in the whirlpool of tranquility.

Letting peace and happiness enter the world of reality.

Remember me I’m the foundation of all of humanity,

The body and soul of human nature existing in vanity.

For my heart joins the very fibers of true existence.

Letting you bask in the glory of your own persistence.

Remember me I’m the one who loves you.

Truly, forever, through the annals of time.

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ss29angel commented on Remember Me


your poems evoke emotion in the souls of man. they affect people. poetry infects our hearts and your virus is one i would never cure. keep up the inspiration, and listen for the muses call.



I'm glad my virus is clean and offers inspiration some can really be dirty and devastating.

SavVySam commented on Remember Me


Lovely images in your sweeping words of beauty! Great line.. "convictions are subtle in the whirlpool of tranquility." wish it were mine! Fine work my friend!



Thank you bunny rabbit, coming from you (with your amazing talent) no compliment could ever be better.

dahlusion commented on Remember Me


I like the simpleness of your benign rhymes, the simpleness of your mind's lean foliage.



I write with compassion using everyday language that readers of all ages can comprehend. I use parables and poetic persuasion in the simplest way I know. My stories unlike my poems are filled with subliminal messages disguised for unawareness. It all boils down to this; I love people and I love to write.



Seeing that I am from the school of haed knocks I don't know what you mean by my minds lean foilage. Does that mean my my is lacking in cluster,



I wish I could remove my last reply; it just goes to prove that my mind is lean foliage. Oh yes, I learn by the mistakes I make. BDC

Gracey commented on Remember Me


beauiful, "For my heart joins the very fibers of true existence." besttt line :)




rmlee commented on Remember Me


i've read a few of your pomes,and I really like them.




Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

BigDaddyCash’s Poems (47)

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Title Comments
Poetry From The Heart (Tierra) 12
Bard Buck-er-roo 2
A Valentine Dilemma 11
The Swan Song 5
Yesterday 12
Grandma 10
Lady Tells Her Story 6
Total Recovery...In
Follow Up Letter to Josh 7
My Letter to Josh 3
Friends 11
Moving from a World of Discontentmen
My Name is Love 13
My Prayer for Susan Stoutenburg 2
The Video Clown 0
My Job at the Hilton 0
I Believe, Yes I Believe 1
Pingsing 0
Preface 1
Mamasan Christmas 3
Grand Lady of Rhyme 4
Time Travel 1
The Damn Song Blues 3
Writers Dilemma 1
MyLady 3
Computer Savvy 5
Lady Luck and Deprivation 2
Project Leader 1
Remember Me 8
Lonely Roads 5
Campaign Number One 0
A Perfect World 10
Daddy of Elation 2
There Just Has To Be 7
Cheryl Stevenson 3
Love Letters...Let
ters to Elena
Highlights of a Love Affair 2
Egoistic Mindset (3 tracks) 1
Dear Jimmy 4
I Guess I Could Call This; Amazing Grace 2
Waltz to My Song 9
Beautiful Dreamer at Bay 3
In a World of Dreams 7
Comment about Love Letters 3
Plain and Simple 11