REMEMBER ME

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This is still a work in progress. I'm trying to convey the idea of two lovers lost in time who find each other every time they enter a new life. I'd like to turn this into a series of poems. Showing them finding each other in different times. I am really struggling with this one and will see what comes out of it. It's kind of rough. But, I hope an enjoyable read none the less. Any feed back would be great.

REMEMBER ME

You know me now.
But, if you'll remember,
you knew me then.
 
When into the looking glass,
I vanished.
The very idea,
seemed so outlandish.

Will you;
REMEMBER ME,
The next time
around?

Once again,
will our love be found?

As each year,
and decade pass.

WILL YOU REMEMBER ME?

Will I continue to lose you,
through the looking glass?
Where will we find ourselves,
ten years down the road?
Will you
REMEMBER ME,
Will we have,
one another to hold?

One day if  you,
do not find me.
Will you;
REMEMBER ME?
Would I even know?

Would I even realize,
I was missing, the other half
of my soul?
What if the looking glass
should shatter,
If I didn't know,
Would it even matter?

Would I go through life never feeling complete?

Would I wander alone,
hoping we'd meet?

Will I always sense,
I have a purpose,
in finding you?

Will I search each time,
I vanish into,
The looking glass,
I look into?
Will you,
REMEMBER ME,
Every Time
We find ourselves,
in a new place?

For to go on without you,
I don't think,
I could face.

Will you,
REMEMBER ME,
And that being together;
is our destiny?

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rjmichael commented on REMEMBER ME

07-01-2010

Ah! the looking glass. I have one called fisher ofmen about a looking glass. I love the idea behind this one cuz i believe in reincarnation.its great!! keep it up

redbloodink commented on REMEMBER ME

06-26-2010

Ohhhh destiny is a thing we can try to avoid but it finds us we don't find it.... great write Am2....... love red

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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