Remember me

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Remember me

 

 

When you feel lonely… and nobody is there around you

When you hear voices and they are the echo of yours

When the nights are prolonged and your eyes stay open…

Please SMILE… and remember me

 

When you feel sad… and tears just drop abruptly

And your heart is fatigued feeling too much pain

When the light  is extinguished and you see only darkness

Please BELIEVE… and remember me

 

When you feel too weak to face unkind temptations

And your aura is covered   with sorrow and regret

When you feel lost… unable to come back to your way

Pease BE STRONG… and remember me

 

And when you feel this journey is going to last forever

Or  you see  the future too far to trust or reach

When fear undermind  your love and  ideals…

Please HAVE HOPE… and remember me


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Tony5880 commented on Remember me

01-03-2014

I like this write. My mind has been there once before. Its deeply felt with love from the past. I can relate its a thought we all hope some does when we meet are demise or in a break up with that special one please remember me

MissIndependent commented on Remember me

10-17-2010

Your poem is really amazing. I loved reading it. Michelle Kitchen

Madelynn commented on Remember me

08-14-2010

I am not sure what it is about this write that just grabs me. You wrote this so simply, so sincerly- there wasn't alot of fancy phrasing, or heavy spiritual word action. There wasn't extreme imagery, or even metephores that scream to be evaluated.. none of this was painted in these lines, yet still, dearest- I was completely swept away. I felt each line as if you were personally here with me, consoling me- rescuing me from 'life'. Ya know, this piece is simply beautiful, and needs not be overstated to hold the bouquet of poetry, that it holds so effortlessly. This writing is a hug. For this, I thank you, and give you a big hug back! I love this poem- for ALL that is, simply.-Maddi

jyothi commented on Remember me

08-13-2010

You seems to me a kind person who thinks for other.

Secretdreams

08/13/2010

thank you..

mbryant53 commented on Remember me

08-08-2010

You touched butterfly like upon the great fear in giving your heart totally to another but help for those left behind. Your pen is very soft, Refreshing!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Secretdreams’s Poems (19)

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67
Because I love you 10
Remember me 49
Love and Desire 7
When I close my eyes... I see 4
BELIEVE 4
THE GOLDEN YEARS 8
YOUR LETTERS 2
CONFUSION 3
WAITING 7
THE SWAN 2
Where my muse goes.... 2
Struggle of a Soldier 6
POETRY 12
AMERICA 6
FRIENDSHIP 4
SATURDAY NIGHTS 3
AS TIME GOES BYE 11
Secret Dreams 8