Remember When

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  • Nostalgia

    Remember When

    A girl sits
    on the shores
    of memory,
    and watches
    the past fly by,

     

    Caught up
    in the midst
    of a revery,
    she doesn’t notice
    the present cry,

     

     

     

    A cool breeze
    blows
    on the golden shore,
    as she knowingly opens
    a once locked door,

     

    Where past ,
    present ,
    and future
    is swept
    into the current
    where memory slept,

     

     

     

    With her eyes open wide,
    She dives right in…
    And drowns in the tide,
    Of Remember When.

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    Solaris commented on Remember When

    09-14-2011

    life is so full of memorys some good some bad good job

    redbloodink commented on Remember When

    02-02-2010

    I remember when... thank you for taking me back in time where I try not to live... but on the shore I sit and give my soul back to Him..... red

    gogant commented on Remember When

    01-23-2010

    It doesn't take too much effort to go deeply into memories past. An enjoyable piece, Calliope..........................................gogant

    SavVySam commented on Remember When

    01-18-2010

    Wow...This is an instant favorite! I love this one! That first stanza is magic! Good work!

    summerrose35 commented on Remember When

    01-15-2010

    This is a very good write, and I really liked the flow,the simplicity of it speaks volumes.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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