Reminders Of Him

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I was thinking about my ex.. And i started singing to myself about him and these words just came out and i quickly grabbed a pen and paper and wrote them out.. I dont know if its really that good but tell me what you think..

Reminders Of Him

Everywhere I go

I see your face.

Everyone I know

Just can’t take your place.

 

And if everyone knew

All that we’ve been thru

Maybe they would understand

How hard it is

To stand on my own.

 

With you I was never alone.

I miss the feeling of knowing

You were always there.

Knowing someone always cared.

 

And now I see you everywhere I go.

But I know it’s not you.

Just little pieces I once knew

Just little reminders of someone I once loved.

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spbsdude commented on Reminders Of Him

12-13-2010

A very nice poem that reflects how you truly feel about someone you obviously love. The loss of love is difficult and sad, but you can get through it. I would suggest writing all the emotions you feel inside on the page, it doesn't have to be a poem, and it doesn't have to be all positive, just write and see where it takes you. Pour your soul onto the page, it will help you heal and you may find a very strong piece of work coming from it.

Rhymer commented on Reminders Of Him

12-10-2010

Interesting write very well done. 10 from me................................

angelchaser commented on Reminders Of Him

12-10-2010

For you to be writing like this at 14 is amazing to me. I could NEVER have written like this when I was a teen. It's beautiful and very heartfelt, Ashley. Nice job:)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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