Repentant Heart


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I wrote this poem, last year, for a friend of mine. Whom I unintentionally hurt. Yes, I am human and I too make mistakes.

Repentant Heart

I feel I have no right
To ask your forgiveness
And apologizing in words
Was never good enough for me

Draw close to me
And feel my repentant heart beat
Abrogate my feelings of guilt
And set free my soul from shame

Give me one chance
To breathe new life
Into what was once
A dance between two hearts

So cold and lonely
Are my days without you
And I ache to see
You smile again

My friend, my love
Allow me to hold your heart
In mine once more
And prove myself worthy of you

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tierra7 commented on Repentant Heart


Excellent pen Hun, your true heart reflects on the sincerity in this show an honest man sharin' his soul...indeed we are All human...we falter in every respect...your kind nature and lovin' character win ya over...Kudos for your lovely expression...I love it...Peace Love and Light, Tierra@}-'-,

REGINA2 commented on Repentant Heart


A beautiful poem once again. I can feel your lonely heart in the words.

themommyof2 commented on Repentant Heart


Very touching. If we could all express our sorrow in such a meaningful way!

blackfootlady commented on Repentant Heart


Apology Accepted,lol! Just Kidding! This was very,very good friend.I enjoyed it alot-God Bless- Black



so you dont forgive me?? lol!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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