Reply to on the edge of the woods fourm

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Reply to on the edge of the woods fourm

On the edge of the woods
Oh the colors I see.
On the edge of the woods is where I wish to be.
For on the edge of the woods,
there are only a few steps to take.
Steps to enter the most beautiful place,
where I find myself surrounded with wonders.
Surrounded with beauty and amazing things.
For in the woods nothing is ever the same.
Things are always growing, changing, never the same.
Each tree, leaf and plant is forever changing.
But what of the sounds and smells we find.
The birds constantly calling for love and for warning.
On those rare times when only silence is calling.
Those are the times I find most filled with the most wonderful thoughts
that come from within my heart, my soul, my most inner thoughts.
A feeling of peace, harmony and oneness with the Earth.
This is my most happiest place.
On the edge of the woods is a nice place to be,
but within it's colorful folds is where I dream to be.

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Rapple commented on Reply to on the edge of the woods fourm

11-11-2009

Nice, but I liked some of your others more. most of this goes smoothly, but there is one part, that was repetitive.

themommyof2

11/13/2009

I know. I just wrote this as it came to me. I should have read it a time or 2 more before I posted it.

EG3RED commented on Reply to on the edge of the woods fourm

11-03-2009

THIS ONE IS ALSO GOOD I LIKE THE WAY YOU CAME UP WITH THIS... VERY NICE

themommyof2

11/03/2009

Thank you very kind of you to say.

TimG commented on Reply to on the edge of the woods fourm

10-30-2009

Nice how simple colors can be brought to life with mere words.

themommyof2

10/31/2009

That was very nice to hear. I really did want to paint a visual picture with this one.

MarionYost commented on Reply to on the edge of the woods fourm

10-27-2009

Wow... Pretty. Paints a picture I like this, Good job All the best -Marion-

themommyof2

10/27/2009

Thank you Marion. I absolutely love the woods and the ocean.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.