rescued

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love, reservations, past hurts

rescued

Mesmerized, memorized, and tantalized.
Can this love be brought to life?
It simmers on the outside while exploding on the inside.
I wanna scream this love is alive!!
Under your spell I'm taken aback.
Any life before you has been long forgotten. No distress!
An imprint on my brain and my heart for all ages to come. This love will be written about as the greatest love story ever known and it's my own. I begin to wonder how I ever felt anything before. Before you came through that door.
The door to my heart wasn't wide open and there posted was a sign.
DO NOT ENTER.
 
But you didn't let that stop you because you saw all the other signs.
With faith to believe in a love so true you broke through.
With the tenderness of passions delight you turned on the light.
Dispelling all darkness and lies you gave me the courage to once again give love a try.
Seeing past a cold exterior into my heart of hearts.
You started a fire that has blazed past remorse.
Thankful to have love renewed.
So thankful God sent you.

My darling, thank you for never giving up on me. I love you true.


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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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