Restless

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  • Sadness

    Restless

    Restless crying, My systems dying
    left with no choice
     but to
     no longer claim my inner voice.


    Everyday the same disastrous game
    Have you no Fame
     to go with
     you're shame!?


    Waiting and begging for 
    some kind of relief!!

    I can no longer carry this grief....

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    gypsyf8 commented on Restless

    02-09-2011

    your words always strike a cord with me that rings so true . . . . a beautiful sadness that i relate well to
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    kage commented on Restless

    02-09-2010

    well worded and good thought pattern. short but bitter sweet i like it and will read more of your work.
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    bforibus commented on Restless

    02-09-2010

    i got such distress from this poem. pain and a im ready to end it type of feel. great job on this piece
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    ArizonaPlay

    02/09/2010

    thank you for your comment, I always value your opinion.

    soulwriter commented on Restless

    02-01-2010

    Binding, begging for release - your words squirm and then... beautifully expressed and yes I agree the picture completes the mood.
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    WordSlinger commented on Restless

    01-18-2010

    this is intense, nice, the picture goes with the emotion, a beautiful suffication, maybe, ty WS
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    ArizonaPlay

    01/19/2010

    thats exactly what it is suffacation

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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