Resurrection

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Butterflies hold a special meaning to me, and I just love how graceful and vibrant they are.

Resurrection

The butterflies surround me

swirls of colors and shapes

dancing back forth so aptly

beauty not changing as they traipse.

Flutter back and forth to many places

On wings as transparent as a single thread of silk.

 

Shades of bronzes, blushes, blazes

some more subtle, yellow, blue, even green.

So many butterflies, can't see through the haze.

They whisper by my ears like a soft summer breeze.

 

The sign of resurrection, of change,

for it changes from a baby caterpillar,

bursting from it's cocoon, a vibrant new creature.

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rjmichael commented on Resurrection

06-30-2010

I really like this one fubar, it reminds me of a mural I painted called "change the essence of recovery" great job!

Rhymer commented on Resurrection

02-14-2010

Very descriptive and imaginative poem. well done. 10 from me.

bluedreamer commented on Resurrection

02-12-2010

It was good it made the butterflies seem real to you, like you could reach out out and touch them.

angmccallum commented on Resurrection

01-30-2010

Although I also love butterflies I don't quite get why out of all things you chose butterflies.. yet who am I to tell you what to write your poetry about... REALLY!!!

Rhymer commented on Resurrection

12-04-2009

So much talent for so one so young, excellent job 10 from me.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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