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I’m startin over – beginnin again with a clean slate
I threw out all my old shit and even bought new clothes
The past is not the future – will not be my fate
I took all the makeup and masks off my nose
And now there’s something I want to state
Look at it, my nose, - on its own it still glows
So now I’m telling y’all it’s not too late
To do away with all your foes
You might have called one or two a mate
Be careful not to do away with those
Sketch on paper what it is you will create
No need to arm him with arrows and bows
Just don’t allow him to eat society’s bait
No walking around in that oh-so-familiar zombie-like doze
He will walk around with his own gait
And everyone sound from his mouth will be prose
Now that your past is off your plate
He can forget about all he owes
To the events that made you start to debate
And, through him, above which rose
And now you have time to wait
And watch the falling snows
When finally open is the gate
And “upstairs” the new you goes
When He is finally ready to give you a rate
Know that no caution to the wind He throws
So you will be able to stand there on your crate
Without to the bones being froze
And you will feel not an ounce of hate
Not even in your toes

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

MayaReid’s Poems (129)

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A Discourse on Discourse 1
These Things 3
Figures 1
i should tell you 3
Empire State 0
Come Hell or High Water 1
Where Do We Go From Here? 2
Dispersal 0
Let Me Count the Ways 1
I am (or Kujichagulia) 2
Six Degrees of Steparation 1
My Best Friend's Wedding 0
Reflection 0
The Writing on the Walls 0
To My Mother, on Her Fortieth Birthday 2
Drunk Savior 0
Dear Son/Daughter 2
Escape Velocity 2
The Whisper 4
Rocks and Shoeboxes 1
The Day We Almost Kissed 1
Loving and Leaving 0
The String that...Saved Me? 0
The Love of My Life: Take Two 0
The Divorce 0
The Garden of Life 2
Some Things I Know 1
And One for Me? 4
Storms 2
Spider 0
Specks -2
Sorrow 0
Sonnet III 0
Sonnet II 0
Sonnet I 0
Sometimes 0
So They Told Me Society... 0
So I Heard In Class Today 0
So Far Away 0
So Beautiful 1
She Will be Missed 0
She Didn't Know 0
Running for My Life 1
Revolution Pie 0
Revision 0
Rejection 0
Questions 0
Pinnochio 0
Owl 0
Over You 1
Our Silent Stranger 0
Our Broken Possibility 0
Originality 1
One Coke with Two Straws 0
On Loan from the Universe 0
Nothing But Tomorrows 0
Not to Be 0
Not So Constructive Criticism 0
No One Knows 0
My Wish 0
My Shackles 1
My Friends 0
My Dream Truth -1
My Box 0
Mother Dearest 0
More 0
Mixed Signals 0
Maybe Crazy is Catchin' 0
Maya... 0
Loving You 0
Love 0
Losing Someone 2
Life 0
Letting Herself Love You 0
Faith 0
Kryptonite 1
Just Listen 3
It Seems Like I Can Only... 1
Incarcerated 0
If the Whole Wide World Was Up to Me 0
If Only 0
I Told You That I Loved You 0
How Did You Get Here? 1
Hoping Against Hope 0
Hold Fast to Love 0
Her Missing Soul 0
He Told Me He Was Coming 0
Half 0
Growing Up With You 0
Go Ahead and Gasp 0
Giving Thanks 0
Game. Set. Match. 0
Freedom 0
For You I Will 0
Flying from the Masquerade Ball 1
Finding the Lost You 0
Fell 0
Falling 1
Extraordinary Girl 1
Effortless 0
Dying Without You 0
Drifting Apart 1
Don't Make Me Any Promises 0
Differences 2
Did You Ever Wonder... 2
Despite Our Efforts 1
Depression 3
Defining Me 1
Deeper 1
Dear Daddy 3
Come to Me 0
Closets 3
Broken, Bruised, and Bloody 2
Breaking Through the Sky of Lies 1
Blue 3
Bloody Love 0
Birthday 1
Between 0
Be Good to Your Daughters 2
Band Aids 1
An Ode to Music 4
An Ode to Dreaming 1
Americans, the Circus Folk 4
Alone 2
A.D.D. 3
A Not a Poem Poem 3
A Love Forgotten 3
A Love Deferred 1
A Beautiful Lie 7