Rise

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    Originally a song, I decided it wasn't very musical. I cut out my choruses and made this. It's also based lightly on the game Bioshock, as can be seen in the first two lines in the last stanza. Overcoming oppression is a topic I've enjoyed playing with for a while.

    Rise

     One man leads
    Thousands follow
    He works their hearts
    Broken and hollow

    Their arms ache and pain
    Their backs are burned
    Through deathly trial
    Their lives are earned

    But dawn shall come
    On a glorious day
    Their chains will break
    No more will they obey

    Turn away the commands
    Given by hateful men
    Throw up your arms
    They shan't speak again

    Join the forces
    That guide your kind
    By your works
    Freedom you'll find

    Marching off
    To bright new lands
    Life will better
    Than ever planned

    A man chooses
    A slave obeys
    No more do you serve
    Long gone are those days

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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