Road

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Road

Doubt takes it’s turn with hesitation,

 

Far way from the porcelain road.

 

The glass man’s house,

 

stands strong against the calm pale slab,

 

That tell no mention of what the dry doubt had.

 

Memories to break

 

 at the next dawn.

 

Stand strong will the glass man,

 

at least from the dusk

 

 till the sun shines slight

 

 on the mourning dew

 

 surely on the lawn. 

 

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ginga commented on Road

08-01-2010

KerriAnne, Very creative, clever imagery and I love the last line taking the reader by surprise with "lawn." ginga

ta commented on Road

12-23-2009

sounds so lonely, this glass man........cold and lonely...........I feel it.....

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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