Rock me baby

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Rock me baby

Queen of Sheba has a dream

I know you want to rock this Stream
Caress an manipulate

 Entangled bodies intertwined
Absolutely influence
My body Devine
Simultaneously communicate

Stimulate and inspire
We move
Together as the chorus is played
Reverberate and hum

Euphonious Passionate knotty
Lyrics’
In each others embrace

We shake
And sway with each others
Move to the rhythm of our hearts beating
As one

 

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LenaM commented on Rock me baby

11-18-2010

I liked this a lot. To me it's got an edgy feel ,an intensity that is palpable between the the two characters. Well done

kdarcy commented on Rock me baby

07-31-2010

Nice, not sure of the title, the last line is ok, but its been implied in the piece already ... maybe close it softly ? Enjoyed it, be well

knight4696 commented on Rock me baby

06-13-2010

Keep on Rockin' me baby! Keep on rockin! Rockin me Baby! :) Couldn't help it Blue .. Steve Millers classic hit started playin on the radio when I was reading this! lol! :) Great write! :) Ken

lorenzo commented on Rock me baby

06-13-2010

cool.............................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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