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This is a sad little thing i wrote because i'm sad...why wont they love me

Run

Run quickly to my side, my love,
and hold me oh so close.
The feel of your skin is so intoxicating,
and your eyes are so damn hypnotizing.

I think I'm lost in loving you.

But.  My.  Love is unrequited,
and it kills me to think of you,
holding and touching someone else,
and not knowing I'm here too!

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tykehall commented on Run

01-05-2010

really like it when one conveys so much emotions with just a few words or phrases like this one does.that's kind of how i like to style most of my writing.examples r, 'sparks','sing memorabilia sing',and 'feeling acquainted,are we?' oh and 'happily married' these r all one or two sentences and again thanx for sharing

stellar commented on Run

12-17-2009

Ahhh...This is an inspiration of so intense a love...and love to read the heart of this,,I know when you wrote this you are beaming with love...^_^ v

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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