sad and beautiful dream

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sad and beautiful dream

 I am in a car with townsmen

we are searching

I am sensing
I find a home it is my home

a nicer home than the one before it
and yet somehow the same
It is light and fresh and woody with plants and peaceful
and among the dead that suddenly appear to me
one by one
sitting in silence
I am seeking you
I turn around and you are there smiling and hugging me
if only your were here to hug me now
your hair your smile your motherly eyes
where are the men who will take me to you?
where is this sweet home?
sadness and frustration
restless waking
 feeling so alone and cold and wrought with heartache
for the weight of the world
 
sorrow is losing someone you love

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WordSlinger commented on sad and beautiful dream

11-11-2010

Ok you asked me to critique, and Im going to try, but this is what I apreciate, I like dream poetry, and it is a realm all it's self, so you did well with mystic setting. As a poem with your style, I find it great, so ty WS, here is a link to read- http://www.originalpoetry.com/forum/view/topic/topic_id/4018

LadyLuck commented on sad and beautiful dream

11-05-2010

WoW! Nice work. probably not your best but still a very good poem to be had and read by others im sorry you lost some one dear to you but your dreams is only one place of which you two will see eachother

shywoodrose

11/05/2010

thanks lady!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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