Sadie Hawkins

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    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this to ask a guy to the Sadie Hawkin's dance... well....he said no...oh well, we cant get them all...

    Sadie Hawkins

    I know our acquaintance has not been long,
    but listen here as I try to be strong,
    I know I'm shy, as you probably see,
    but I would like you to get to know the real me,
    poetry is my best way to comprehend,
    how it's a great guy like you I want to befriend,
    so please give this relationship a chance,
    and lets get to know each other at the dance!

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    ShadowStealer commented on Sadie Hawkins

    09-28-2010

    What a great idea! Oh, well, he missed out. I'm glad to see that you don't seem that down about it though. ShadowStealer

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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