Sadistic Captivity


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Not particular reason, one word lead to another - just as in life one action often leads to another!

Sadistic Captivity


Come lay your head on my chopping block - I dare you

My blade isn’t all that sharp

I just want to see your pretty little neck stretched out

Vulnerable to my control


Get caught up somewhere between thinking and breathing

Don’t say a thing, close your eyes and trust me

Relax, become numb to the severed suffering

It’s only a clever mind game that I’m playing


We both have been subliminally whipped into submission

I’m not being cruel; it’s you who asked for this

I won’t explain, for you have taught me -

Sometimes there is no difference between pleasure and pain


Please - down on your knees

Place your head upon my guillotine

As you hear the sliding steel

I’ll kiss your lips and smile

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Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Beautiful Stranger 19
Symbolic Differences 17
Drowning in a Sea of Me 18
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Pretty Bullets 32
Wishing Her Well 18
The Death of Life 22
Don’t Live Without Love 17
Never Ever After 14
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Love, Lust, and Lingering Sensations 13
My Haunting Heart 17
Weathering The Winds of Trust 12
Do That Again Please 21
Love's Coffin 48
It Hurts 31
In Every Living Space 14
Gargoyle (Girl) 27
Controlled 14
Your Love Is Poetry 25
Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me 13
Nothing Can Compare 8
Melancholy Cure 10
Our Daydream Dance 8
Vanishing 30
All That You Are 10
Words Worth 43
Black 37
The Toy 23
The Rose Eternal 28
Whisper From Behind the Mirror 38
Stormy Purification 13
Love Stains 19
The Tree Within 19
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The Gallows of Destructive Love 10
Love of the Soul 15
Crystal Iris 14
The Nature of Relationship 24