Sanctuary in My Dream

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Someday the glory will be so white bright, so full of harmony, that we can barely even imagine, while here on earth...I long for the day...that glroious day. peace of christ

Sanctuary in My Dream

© 2011 Randolph D Brown Jr

There’s a place I go,
  where no one else could know,
snowflakes so brilliant bright,
  squeezing my eyes so very tight;
to distant lands I travel,
  amazing, majestic wonders I marvel,
could this really, truly be,
  or just my imagined reality.

When falling all around
  maddening, hitting the ground,
wet liquid, resembles rain,
  feels more like abysmal pain;
why then, do I not fear,
  could be, cause he’s near,
a sanctuary in my dream,
  to me, so real, I made it seem.

Floating high, soft white cloud,
  sounds muffled, not loud,
never a scratch, break, nor tear,
  no evil in the dark to fear;
faraway lands, seas, white shore,
  seeing forever, seeing much more,
for hours upon hours, pure peace,
  desperately wishing, no cease.

This place I go, when I need,
  to God in heaven, I do plead,
harmony, solace, most I seek,
  make me humble and meek;
mold me, shape me into the man,
  for your glory, do all that I can.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Isaiahjanae commented on Sanctuary in My Dream

11-29-2011

Another amazing poem, Randy ! Way to go :) I really, truly enjoy'd THIS poem immensely !!! Love, S

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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