Sand
If my love were a grain of sand
I'll bring back every bit
from there to here
to around the world
I give all my love to you
and with the sand
I'll build a castle
for all of those to see
and make them jealous
of you plus me
Sand
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SilverGirl commented on Sand
08-11-2009
- What a sweet, heartfelt poem. I truly like this.. short, concise and complete. Great job.. Hugs SG..
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08-11-2009
- Nice poetry lostangryyouth i really liked it short and sweet and to the point. Great read thanks for sharing this with us here at the site.
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