Sands of Time

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Sands of Time

If only I could turn back the sands of time

Would I see a world that was meant to be

Different and clear

So bright and so near

If only I could turn back the sands of time

I would walk a different path

Einstein's intellectual power

Cleopatra's standing

If only I could turn back the sands of time

Who would I dare to be

I was dealt these cards

 Must make due

So no more dreaming

 Cleopatra's standing in the sands

Of time

 

 

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kmooney commented on Sands of Time

04-17-2010

Interesting read. I like poems about time. I am sort of an Einstein fan myself. I have several poems about time and the old genius. I was a little confused with the "sands of time", more used to the "hands of time". I lked it though. Thanks for sharing and welcome to OP. Oh, and thanks for reading my Seagull poem. Please read more....Kevin

GUSTY commented on Sands of Time

04-15-2010

I SOMETIMES WISH I COULD EFFECT SOME CHANGES IN "THE SAND OF TIME", BUT ALAS, NO!!! IT ALL LOOKS LIKE DESTINY CAN'T BE ATTAINED BY THE LONG HANDS OF CHANGE.I AGREE!!! WHAT A GOOD WORK!!!

bluskyinthenite

04/15/2010

Thanks for taken the time to read my poems. been writting now for a little over a year. I love poetry with each passing day.

MindNumbing commented on Sands of Time

04-15-2010

I think we might all do things a little differently if we could relive certain moments... but it's also important to remember that the choices we make (good and bad) and the lessons that we gain from those choices are what shapes us as a person in the long run... great job on this :)

bluskyinthenite

04/15/2010

thank you very much. much appreciated.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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