Satan Sprang

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A true story about a girl I knew many years ago. Wherever she is now, I hope she has found peace.

Satan Sprang

She said she saw the Devil
When she was very young
She hid under the sheets
Until he was gone
Said she peeked out
From underneath
Saw his hooves
On his goat-like feet
His face was twisted
In the manner of a demon
All she could hear was her heartbeat
And the sound of breathing
Closed her eyes silently
Inside she was screaming
I believe she believed
In what she was seeing

To this day
I wonder
If Satan sprang
Upon her slumber
Or was she prey
Of another?
In dark of night
In desperate hunger
Did he take
Back the covers?
Her world exposed
To his wishes...

She had fierce blue eyes
Oh, what can lie
Behind them?
She liked the taste of blood
She showed me all her cuts
And told me tales
Of ghosts and hauntings
That had plagued her most her life
Then she took her knife
And right before me
Blood spilt from her arm
I took the blade away
And said she had to stay
I told her there would be
No more harm
Her eyes were slightly dazed
Definitely glazed
Looked as though she had fallen
Under a charm
We talked awhile,
I can't remember about what
Anything to subdue
My alarm...

And I still wonder
Was she crazy?
A category 5 imbalance?
A schizo reverb skipping
Through her head?
Or did Lucifer appear
Fill her soul with fear
And jack up all the clockwork
In her head?
Did he inject her with dread?
Make her focus on dead?
Or did another demon grab her
Making her soul sadder
Than it probably could have
Ever, ever been?
Confusion in the darkness
Illusion that he's harmless
When in the daylight
He'd pretend to be her friend
Did she see the Beast
Because she couldn't see her dad,
Or her brother or another or
Whoever brought that kind of fear
Upon a child of light?
Or did Lucifer
Truly arise,
Horns and tail
And immense size
Standing by her bed
That fateful night?

I'll never know now,
We lost touch long ago
I just pray she has Love
Within her soul
I hope that she's found a way
Out of her abyss
May angels help guide her
Away from darkness...

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Kallen commented on Satan Sprang

03-20-2011

Hi Trocka7. It is Kallen. I have been away for a while. I liked the early poems you wrote so much we started dialoguing. I found I quickly reached an impasse in clear understanding between us. But I harbor no ill will of any kind. This poem (and many many like it on this forum) tells me that there is much darkness and the anguish of inordinate fear. I know this because it used to be my experience. Until I met Him. Having tried imagination and other ways to remove to safe and happy ground there was nothing that worked until I called out to Him. Miss our talks. I wonder where you are tonight.Your friend, Kallen

kmooney commented on Satan Sprang

09-17-2009

Terrific work. I liked this a lot too. You know, you and I may be kindred spirits of a sort. Have you sifted through my poems? You should take some time and do so. I think you'll find many similarities. Your style is different but we have some similar content. Look at Faceless Child, Do Animals Cry, Poignantly Calm, God's Perfect Angel and Blue Tuesday Morn (the 95th floor). Sorry for the long list but I am exited to read your work and would be most interested in your opinions. I would love to chat sometime, pick your brain if you will. This was an intriquing read. Thanks again for the share... Kevin

Crush commented on Satan Sprang

09-05-2009

trocka, trocka, great work here. i forgot how much i liked your work. sad but just well done. there are many of us out here who have experienced sex abuse but find that way to do what comes next. i hope your friend has done well. thank u for sharing this great piece.

ginga commented on Satan Sprang

08-29-2009

Trocka, I am not much on evil or demonic poems byut this one had me mesmerized in reading every single line. Kudos for such skill in rhyming. Also there is a poet on the Forums who is looking for horror poems to read. I recommend this one. Maybe you could take a look and let her on to this. ginga

trocka7

08/31/2009

Thank you again Ginga! I wish I could fully express how much I appreciate feedback, especially from one who's work I truly admire. So thank you! I am also not big on "horror poems" at all, but this just came forth one day when I was wondering about the girl in this poem...I have written dark poetry, generally about some more difficult times in my life, some times of tumultuous emotion that had to find a way out, and it did so through my pen. Thanks again for your comments, I love to rhyme very much!

JadedJezzabel commented on Satan Sprang

08-18-2009

this was hard to read but still very well written and you held my attention the whole time through to the end.........i hope your friend is well......and i hope you find some piece too.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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