SATANA

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Satana is pronounced:   "Say -Tah- Nah"

SATANA

The wind howls across the empty fields,
As the sun begins to go down.
There's fire in the sky - Heat intensifies,
As it burns it's way to the ground!
And in evil bliss - Satan's mistress,
Emerges with a hissing sound.
Dressed in black - Ready to attack,
Anyone who is around!

She's Satana! - -
She's got ya in her sight!
She's Satana! - -
She's gotta a lethel bite!
She's Satana! - -
She's gonna take your life!
She's Satana! - -
She's - the Priestess Of The Night!!

With eyes of fire - Fangs of desire,
Yes, the evil it has begun.
Satana's reign is here to stay,
Can't find no place to run!
It was mornin' - people fallen,
And the sun refused to shine.
Evil awakens - People forsaken,
Your time has come to die!

She's Satana! - -
She's got ya in her sight!
She's Satana! - -
She's gotta a lethel bite!
She's Satana! - -
She's gonna take your life!
She's Satana! - -
She's - the Priestess Of The Night!!

Burnin' flesh - Still burnin' fresh,
Lingers within the air.
Go ahead and cry - Cause you're gonna die,
It's time to pay your fare!
The battle is done - Satana has won,
The people have met their fate!
Thru the barren land - She's cast her hand,
There was no way to escape!

She's Satana! - -
She's got ya in her sight!
She's Satana! - -
She's gotta a lethel bite!
She's Satana! - -
She's gonna take your life!
She's Satana! - -
She's - the Priestess Of The Night!!

                                                                  KjK
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Teardrops commented on SATANA

07-03-2010

I love the poem , The picture is off the charts and hope i only see her picture and not her for real .Knight how do i say great , awsome , beyond wonderful . You amaze me i wish i could write one 1/10 the way you do . A fan always Marie

knight4696

07/04/2010

THanks Marie - I love the pic ... Definately off the charts as one hot sadistic bitch. lol! :) I am so happy you are venturing beyond the door into my older writes and glad you enjoy my dark and twisted side! :) Thanks again! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite commented on SATANA

05-17-2010

Head banger song that could be. Wonderful write ... Love it

knight4696

05/21/2010

Thanks Blue!! :) This was written in my headbanging heyday! I always loved the dark 80's metal - and my favorite inspiration was Ronnie James Dio - I just can't believe that he is gone. He just passed away earlier this week. :( But, he has left behind a heavy metal legacy and will always live on in his music. RIP Ronnie. Oh and btw .. Thanks again for your awesome comments! Much appreciated my friend :) Ken

mustascheman commented on SATANA

05-07-2010

Okay...before I even read this poem..let me tell ya..I LOVE the picture..she's HOT..now that's the kind of girl I'd spend eternity with..down boy..down I say!!! Now I'll read..OH YEAH...bite me, drag me to HELL..within her wings of merciless desire for death I'm willing to dwell. Awesome piece! A.T.

knight4696

05/09/2010

lol! :) Thanks Al ...you are a funny bastard! lol! She is hot as hell aint she? :) Thanks again for the read and comments! :) Ken

mustascheman

05/09/2010

I won't tell your Queen you said that! (hehehe)

Maleficent

05/24/2010

ummm... I'm tellin' on y'all!! ;)

knight4696

05/24/2010

Now See what the hell ya did now Al!!!! lol :)

QueenotheKnight

05/24/2010

Alright~ What's goin' on over here...? Don't make me go all Joan Crawford on y'all! ;)

mustascheman

05/24/2010

I'm just an innocent bystander here.....

am2anangel commented on SATANA

02-04-2010

Another write that I can imagine as a song in my head. very visual and well written. Tonya

knight4696

02/06/2010

lol! :) Thanks Angel .. I hope you can imagine a song! Heavy metal in fact .. These are song lyrics as well. :) Thanks again! :) Ken

Rhymer commented on SATANA

12-12-2009

Such a talent on these boards, I read your poetry because you are one of the more talented writers here. Excellent write once again.

knight4696

12/13/2009

Thank you very much Rhymer! Your comments once again truly humble me. But my sentiments about you and your work are the same! ... Thanks again friend! Ken

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