Satisfaction

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Satisfaction

Have   you tried the New drink                                                                                                                   Called Nicole ?  It’s a Liqueur                           

Stop whispering 
Drunks are always hearing voices                                                                            

Oh come on,  it’s like a tickling feather in My ear 
Liqueur, Liqueur , Nicole, Nicole, If I Had a drink
it would be a good cure                                            

Another look, another drink                                             
Is this distraction, contraption or Satisfaction

Oh no !  I`m talking back to those voices                 
 How low can I go Nicole, I`m not drunk

Imagined conversation

You’re a tasty one, you are so warm                     
Been here long?  You’re my best freind

One shot is not enough, Give me a double             
Wait-  u-  oh- I`ll  take the whole bottle

I`m feeling good  whoa!

Sign says drink in moderation  
What a consideration

 It’s getting late who needs a mate                                   
I have my liqueur, her name is Nicole  
She need not climb a pole

She is warm, does not talk back                              
Sleeps with me in the sack

Liqueur has a hold I`ve been told                               
I`m starting to talk bold

Wilbling, wobbling, sobbing                                            
It always does this to me

Emotions come, emotions go                                      
Help me to let them go

I`ll have another to go                                             
Should it be a Nicole?

The voices screaming as she is leaning                       
Ye-yeh-no, I`ll drink it here

2 am, not sure if feeling good or fine                     
Nicole is still on my mind

Stumbling, sleeping, slept

Next morning oh, ah

Who and the hell is Nicole?

                                                By: rich Severson  6-20-09

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thecross commented on Satisfaction

01-11-2011

love the humor in this, every now and then when all else fails lose or find yourself in a bottle it can be quite therapeutic.

Tempestlady commented on Satisfaction

07-18-2009

A great piece about losin onesself in the minute. My guess is the bartender. or a lost love, or a kind of liquer. Enjoyed t. Write on......

phatdaddee commented on Satisfaction

07-13-2009

Great job! Was lost in the beginning but I found my way by the end!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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