saturday night

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    saturday night

    He questions himself,
    more than he strives to succeed.
    not driven by wealth,
    and no concept of greed

    Each coming day brings more to his mind
    it is harder and harder to relax and unwind.
    This lifes not the life as a boy he'd designed,
    For now theres no way to know what you'll find.

    Life is a struggle,
    with more questions than answers.
    Sometimes you make trouble,
    and sometimes you take chances.

    So he sits and he thinks,
    never smokes , never drinks.
    Trying to solve all the problems,
    and straighten the kinks.

    This man never married,
    he didn't have no friends
    this burden he carried,
    until his sweet bitter end

    spent his whole life thinking, constantly stressed.
    never realizing how much he was blessed.
    life is too short to regret what you miss
    and more often than not ignorance is bliss.

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    countrypoet commented on saturday night

    12-24-2009

    This is a very interesting and thought provoking poem.I can relate to it as I once felt like this.I have learned though to forgive myself and others for mistakes and try to set my sights on more attainable goals and not be to hard on myself if I don't achieve all of my goals and dreams as soon as planned.Thank you for sharing another very good poem. Terry

    zwadi commented on saturday night

    05-28-2009

    ...........i like this poem a lot..seemz lik it comes from the heart.............it actually has me curious bout wat exactly ur talkin bout.

    dtalks

    05/28/2009

    I am talking about myself and my anxieties, my strive for perfection and my issues with shortcomings

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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