Save Me!!


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Sorry Jason - but, there's a new butcher on the block! ....

Save Me!!

Save me from the Evil that lurks within,
Double personality - the split begins!
One side a gentleman, the sophisticated touch,
The other a madman - the pressures too much!

You'd swear I was just another Jeckyll & Hyde
Personalities battle for control of my mind!
My brain exploding - My beastly cries,
Bloody mangled bodies - Secured alibies!
Save Me!! - Save Me!!
Can you save my soul?!
Save Me!! - Save Me!!
A free life is my goal!!
They say I'm crazy but they don't understand,
Exactly what it's like to be another man!
They criticize everything I do and say,
But, I'll pay them back in another way!!

Screams of terror - Rushin' through my head,
They'll soon regret everything they've said!
Shreaks of fear - Cryin' out in the dark,
They pray for their deaths as I rip them apart!!
Save Me!! - Save Me!!
Can you save my soul?!
Save Me!! - Save Me!!
A free life is my goal!!
There's no place to hide - No you can't run away,
People are ya listenin' to what I say!
Mass murder here- Mass murder there,
People I'm warnin' ya - ya better beware!!

Forget about saving me - my soul is lost,
Personality number two has become the boss!
A bloody demise - has become my life,
Deranged and irate - I carry a knife!!
People - You can't save me!
You can't save my soul!!
A free life- Huh!
To Hell with that goal!!
Comin' ta Getcha! - Gonna Getcha next!!
Your Next!!


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Teardrops commented on Save Me!!


Ken bring it on bet i could take you well me and the dog lol . Great poem if i didnt know you it would give me goose bumps but your heart is pure so no goose bumps . A 10 Marie



LOl! :) I'm glad you can see through my evil disguise. I play in the dark and live in the light. Thanks for being such an avid reader and an understanding friend! :) Ken

purpleswan commented on Save Me!!


I'm normally not into the darker side of poetry but this is very good. You put the thoughts and wording together so well. The artistry is magnificent. Great write.....Swan



Thank you very much purpleswan! I have a tendency to write Dark - but I write Light as well ... I try to keep things mixed up. Thank you so much for your humbling comments, they are much appreciated! :) Ken

xintensex commented on Save Me!!


Wow!...I believe we all possess another side,sometimes it takes a moment or catastrophy to bring that out....check out demons within....Save me sounds like the sequel..did I spell that right,lol



Thanks Reno! :) I appreciate it very much .. I actually wrote this song after returning from a "B grade horror movie I saw back in the 80's I think it was called "Nightmare" ? Anyway I'm on my way over to your page to check out demons within ... Thanks again my friend! :) Ken

am2anangel commented on Save Me!!


another song. this one is definitely from your dark side. Well done again.



Thanks Angel! :) Yes ... one of many Dark song lyrics I wrote back in the 80's - I was very inspired by Ronnie James Dio and a lot of my dark lyrics reflect this. Thanks again! Ken

inkmaster commented on Save Me!!


Great write I liked it . This would work well as a song... Jeff



Thanks Jeff! I appreciate it as always man! Maybe one day it will get recorded! :) Thanks again! Ken

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