Scars

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Scars

I carry these scars around, they are so heavy
that I long to take them off and set them down.
They are invisible to the naked eye,
thats because they are not outside,
on the inside are where my scars lie.
They never seem to heal
and though they are invisible,
the pain is very real
There's no medicine I can take  
to make them dissapear
I have prayed and prayed,
but I dont think my prayers ever reached God's ears.
I try to pretend that they are not there
and sometimes I'm fooled, into thinking they are gone
but when I'm alone the pain is unbearable,
and I know that my scars won't leave
I will always wear these invisible reminders,
same as I wear my heart on my sleeve.

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crazzyy4u commented on Scars

07-21-2009

aww i like it like i could feel your pain good job

gogant commented on Scars

07-21-2009

If only there was a medication you could take to make the pains in one's heart subside. Nice poem...

poetictrisha28

08/06/2009

Thanks for the comment I appreciate everyone's feedback!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

poetictrisha28’s Poems (48)

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What If...... 0
What Kills Me 0
Broken people 1
A heart unworthy 1
Don't judge me 3
Fairytales 0
root of pain 1
Invisible 2
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Free 3
I am stone 3
Pain is love 4
Break Free 4
Unraveled 6
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The Price We Pay 3
My Heart, My Enemy 1
____ 0
Got what you wanted, now you don't want it 1
Love don't give up on me 1
A Victim No Longer 2
Life has never been easy on me 0
God's Tears 4
Forgotten Soul 0
Mask 0
Love/Sex? 2
Won't keep me down 2
My Mother 2
Loneliness is a disease 1
Lost Words 0
1 side 1
Over it 1
How does a woman teach a boy to be a man? 4
Damn is this it? 2
Lost Soul 0
Love Does Not Love Me 1
Son 3
Scars 2
I Can Be No One Else 0
If I could Fly 2
Freedom is Not Mine 0
Love Is Everything 2
Sun 0
Love's Touch 1
Magic 5
Unbearable 3
Message to Myself 3