Searching

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  • SexzAngel
  • Poetry is like living through wave after wave of words filled with emotions

Poem Commentary

The poem speaks for itself. Of dreams and a passion filled longing for love that was not meant to be

Searching

The angel appeared to you at the start of the night.
Her wings did flutter with the last rays of light.
Hold your breath and let it out slow.
Trust not your eyes in the shadows that glowed.
Reach for her but touch her not.
Fight back the urge for in time you will have forgot.
I beg of you.
Protect your heart.
Simple things come there to start.
For in the heart is where love resides.
Split by passion it glides on the tides.
Dont look for your angel
For she is not there.
She entered a rhelm where no one had dared.
Its dark where she enters.
For there is no light.
Why was she sent there?
Is this her fight?
She clutches her chest and fights back the fear.
She bows her head and sheds a tear.
For there is no more time for dancing.
There is only the pain.
There is no time for romancing.
Or tasting the rain.
Cry not for your angel.
Just listen for her song.
She dances with the devil.
For a love thats gone wrong.

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Rhymer commented on Searching

03-11-2010

This is an excellent poem, the opening two lines really drew me in. 10 from me.

SexzAngel

03/11/2010

Thank you Rhymer i greatly appreciate the comment. This is one of my fav poems as well.

summerrose35 commented on Searching

03-11-2010

you have captured my attention! I love your poetry.it is beautiful!

SexzAngel

03/11/2010

thank you so very much Summerrose. I have yet to read any of yours but i am headed there now. Thank you once again for the wonderful comments.

knight4696 commented on Searching

02-06-2010

Sexz ... a wonderfully sadness flows thru-out this piece. Very nicely written! :) The flow and imagery are both superb! Great write! :) Ken

SexzAngel

02/08/2010

Thank you Sir Knight, I think we are all searching for one thing or another. I just wonder at times, just how much energy and love and devotion we are willing to devote to our search? Humm

LaurenProper0 commented on Searching

01-21-2010

Nice singsong flow throughout. . .i got caught up around lines: "I beg of you. Protect your heart. Simple things come there to start." story start and finish. . . .carries well. . you can do more than sense, you can see. Nive job.

SexzAngel

01/21/2010

Thank you very much Lauren. I really appreciate your comments

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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