• wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

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I'm writting this in hopes someone will understand that some secerts need to be told no mater how hard it is to say those words.


I wonder lost
i'm just trying to find
my place in this world.

Where have i gone
where have i been
i'll never tell
these are my secerts to keep.

I try to tell you that
some secerts are good
to keep hidden deep in your heart
while others you just.........
have to tell the world.

i know you where told
shhhhhh its a secert
put it in your pocket
but i gotta tell you baby
this is a secert that you tell
till someone listens
to what you are trying to say.

There are days that i wish i
could become an angel
and fly far away from here,
i envey the caterpitler
that furry little warm creature
cuz no mater what it was before
it still grows wings and gets
to fly away in a diffrent form.

I have secerts no one knows
and someday maybe just maybe
i'll be as strong as you and i to
will be able to tell the world.

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Worthless commented on Secerts


Yes, I think we all feel that way.. But some secrets are just to be kept with God and Us and we hope that he forgives us.. And in the end, he will judge us, but with love because its within him we trust... And yeah sometimes secrets are just to painful to bare and they haunt us till no end that some of them we are forced with regret to share and hope that someone listened enough to take the time to care..

BrokenHeart2009 commented on Secerts


You are an amazing writer, you have such great emotion and imagery in your poems, this poem is just WOW.

StandingBear commented on Secerts


A nicely written poem relating the anticipation of one day being able to tell secrets to the world. Great write! StandingBear

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

wiskeygirl5090’s Poems (76)

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I Am A Surviver 1
Your Growing Up 0
A Dozzen Roses 2
Fast Forword 0
Two Angels 0
The Little Things 0
Dim 4
So Lonely 1
Mothers and Fools 2
I Need Something To Believe In 2
This Hurt 1
Thinking Of You 2
A Hero's Welcome 1
Gone 0
Angels In Heaven 0
Missing You 1
Washing away my sins 1
Hold Me By The Strings 0
I Still Need To Know 2
Letting Go 6
Strong 1
Momma Your My Hero 0
Leaving Home 0
Insanity 1
Im Nothing 2
The Only Sound 1
All My Fault 1
Nobody 1
Confussed 0
No Ones Sees 4
Two Years Ago Today 2
Friends 0
Good-Bye 1
Tourcherd Soul 1
Lonely Tonight 1
Did I 3
Delusions 1
Thats All You Are 1
My Last Teardrop 3
Secerts 3
I'd Give My Life 1
The Little Girl 4
You Saved Me 2
Theres Only One Me 2
And I Will Try 3
Fighting threw the tears 1
To Many Times 0
Wounds 1
Waiting For TheFall 1
Talk Your Shit 1
What Can I do 0
Right Where I Wanna Be 0
Don't You Dare 2
Thats Just Who We Are 0
Everything is gonna be ok 0
Angery All The Time 2
When Its Family 0
A Womans Tear 3
Puppet 3
One More Day 2
Fly Away 1
One More Tear 1
Only Love 0
Moon And Back 1
Fighting Lonely 2
Lonely 2
Forgive Me 2
Forbiden Love 0
My Demon 1
Just Who I am 1
Glistoning Eyes 1
End Of The World 3
The Game 0
Love 0