Secrets/ Crush

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  • Frustrations Of Life

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    This is a poem that is meant to be read to the person being crushed on LOL

    Secrets/ Crush

    He has no name...
    Only a face...
    A unique way of talking
    That noone can replace...
    Comforting brown eyes
    That go on for years.
    I can't approach him!
    I have too many fears!
    We attend the same school,
    But you will never know.
    If you ever hear my secrets,
    It will stop my heart's flow.
    Yeah, I've got secrets.
    I have a crush, too.
    To everyone else its obvious.
    Who will never know?
    You.

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    BlaQReign commented on Secrets/ Crush

    10-12-2009

    I'm digging your poetry, and I shall read more...Your choice of words are damn good...BlaQ's Soul
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    Lolee commented on Secrets/ Crush

    08-09-2009

    Nothing ventured, nothing gained. You are only seventeen. I think it's wonderful that you are shy, plenty of time for romance in a couple of years...lol My kids were in love early too. Just be careful cupcake. Very nice poem.
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    Kia commented on Secrets/ Crush

    08-09-2009

    This poem is so sweet,I hope that you can finally tell that special someone...
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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